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:iconspaceron:
So... some serious critique?
- mixed media with laser print, acryllic, and technical paper.
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:iconpr0jectz:
lookn' very cool :D (Big Grin)
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:iconpdtnc:
wooo!! this is nice :) (Smile)
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:iconelephantseed:

Looks like three sets of elevators that open up to small blue/grey platforms. Those platforms fall to a series of crazy construction and sky.


a. seed /a.

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:iconzeruch:
`zeruch Jun 25, 2003  Professional General Artist
what would I say? hmmm, quite a few things actually:

1. the contrast in terms of detail is a tad diffuse, but not enough to be too distracting.

2. compositionally this is very interesting, as it seems to almost incite a desire to see it at different angles (90 degree turns). The balance is malleable enough that it works in almost any orientation (whioh is kind of cool really if you ask me, which you did, hence whay I am saying it ;) (Wink)

3. colour wise I dig it, except for the reddish grid, in the bg, which looks a little too pink (although I suspect its largely the monitor I am using right now more than anything else -- I have a strong aversion to pink). The use of the grid itself is very good though (in this regard I am in 100% agreement with alchemism...then again, alchemism and I agree on a lot)

4. texturally I like thsi quite a bit (kind of wish it was bigger so I could scrutinze it some more as it seems to have some really intriguing textures going on).
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:iconpwca:
brilliant! I love the contrast of angles with the graph-paper background, very sound design & colorations. Of course I've always loved your interpretation of design, and creativity!
very technical & well constructed!
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:iconsalernopasta:
~salernopasta Jun 25, 2003   Photographer
This is great stuff, so much depth in this too, for being only what looks like two or three photos. You have this grasp of how to use colour I don't think I'll ever understand, you pull this stuff off so effortlessly. This is perfect.
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:iconalchemism:
Well, I am rarely here - but it seems you've caught me at a good time.
My first impression - I absolutely love the red grid you have used as negative space. A backdrop, a border, a stage, whatever - I really think its subtleties work very well. As for the space you are taking advantage of with image - wow! So fragmented it becomes an anti-space, nearly non existant but you've placed it in a realm that captures both - Image and Abstraction.
Great work ~spaceron
+fav from me.
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